Sunday, August 31, 2014

Descriptive Paragraph 1: My Hometown

My Hometown: Lake Geneva
               
                My hometown, Lake Geneva, is a beautiful place. Lake Geneva is in southern Wisconsin in the United States. It’s a small town with only about 5,000 residents. However, in the summer Lake Geneva is very crowded and full of tourists. People come to see our lake. The lake is very beautiful, clear and it’s fairly big. It’s a good lake for swimming, boating or doing other water sports. In the fall, winter and spring, Lake Geneva is more peaceful. It’s nice to take a walk to the lake. In the winter sometimes it is so quiet that you can hear the snow fall. I really miss my hometown!

Walking with my friend Karin and her dog Audie along the lake path in Lake Geneva, Wisconsin. 

WRITING YOUR HOMETOWN PARAGRAPH

1. Make sure to include a topic sentence. Give the name of your hometown and an honest description. 
2. Make sure all the details/supporting sentences describe your hometown. Don't start to talk about your hobbies, your family or a different topic.
3. Answer some of the questions from class today (What can you do there?, What is it like in the fall? etc.)
4. Describe your hometown with adjectives.
5. Tell about what interests you. If something is interesting to you, it will probably be interesting to other people. If it bores you, it will probably bore other people.
6. REMEMBER - Don't use a translator! Your own writing is always best! If you want help to correct your grammar, share your writing with a classmate or with me on Google Docs. We'll also talk about it in class next time!

I can't wait to hear about your hometowns! Do you have any questions about my hometown, Lake Geneva? Ask below in the comments and I'll be happy to answer!  


Welcome!

Hello, everyone, and welcome to the Sophomore Level B blog! I'm Jennifer! I'm pleased to have the chance to teach Sophomore B again this semester. My students last semester were so ambitious, creative and friendly.  Here's a bit about me and how to use this blog!

This is me with my husband, Lee Gumienny, at Haeundae Beach. He also teaches at Dongguk!

ABOUT ME:

 I've taught at Dongguk for almost 3 years. I'm from the United States (Portland, Oregon and Wisconsin). I love cats, theater, writing, singing, reading and movies. I'm a strict vegetarian, but I love food and eating out. I really like teaching. If you ever need help, I am always happy to help you!

ABOUT THIS BLOG: 

I will update the blog at least once a week, sometimes more. I will post all the example essays here. I will also post videos, articles, and discussion topics from time to time. You can ask questions here if you need help with something. You can also earn points for making comments on the blog. 3 good comments (at least one sentence, preferably longer)=1 point. You can earn up to 15 homework points. Make sure that you are signed in with gmail when you make your comments and include your student number so I can find you easily!

YOUR OWN BLOG: 

You can also earn extra credit points by making your own blog. It's very easy once you have a gmail account. Having a blog is a great way to share your work. You can also use it to show employers and schools your English ability. Finally, it's a great way to reach people around the world and tell them about your life and interests. My personal blog: http://jensroadtoeurope.blogspot.kr/ has readers in the U.S., Korea, Germany, Poland, Canada, Turkey, Vietnam, Japan and several other countries. It's a very cool feeling to know that strangers in other countries are reading what you write!

COMMENT ON THIS ENTRY: 

If you like, comment on this entry and tell me a bit about yourself! What are your interests and hobbies? Where are you from? What is your major? What do you want to learn this semester?

Alright! Welcome to Sophomore Level B and welcome to the blog! See you soon!